Interrupted
By Juliarose29
Thu, 16 May 2013
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Warm breeze Weak knees Cool air Don’t care The sand in between my toes As I walk along the beach Seagulls in the ocean Causing a ton of commotion Waves hit the sand hard Crash is the sound they make Kids jump the waves Having so much fun But when its time to get out The fun has just begun I continue my walk along the beach Abandoned towels and blankets A colorful umbrella catches my eye So that is were I lye I fall asleep Then wake up To see a man, mad and old And he tells me to get up The sun is still shining There more time left in the day I gradually become tired Goodnight.
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A funny, quirky beach scene.
A funny, quirky beach scene. This poem reads like a journal entry. A few grammatical errors in your poem. Lye is spelled lie. There is or There's more time left in the day. I enjoyed your day at the beach!
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A funny, quirky beach scene.
A funny, quirky beach scene. This poem reads like a journal entry. A few grammatical errors in your poem. Lye is spelled lie. There is or There's more time left in the day. I enjoyed your day at the beach!
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