Sunset
By beaste
Sun, 28 Apr 2013
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I was going to do a poem about how beautiful a sunset can be, but then I thought that's a bit unoriginal so I've posted this instead XD
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Beatrice, do not give up so
Permalink Submitted by Richard L. Prov... on
Beatrice, do not give up so easily. I am sure you can come up with some original feelings, that will be important to share. Each of us has something to share, so here are some clues for you to try and write a seven line poem, at the very least.
Close your eyes and see that last sunset.
Breathe in the colours.
Feel the warmth of sunny imagination, if a cool night.
Write one word. Repeat the above and write a second word on a second line, then a third word on a third line.
Then write one sentence of at least ten words for each word.
Now work it into a poem with the sound, look, touch and smell of the moment. Good luck. Richard
Richard L. Provencher
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Beatrice, do not give up so
Permalink Submitted by Richard L. Prov... on
Beatrice, do not give up so easily. I am sure you can come up with some original feelings, that will be important to share. Each of us has something to share, so here are some clues for you to try and write a seven line poem, at the very least.
Close your eyes and see that last sunset.
Breathe in the colours.
Feel the warmth of sunny imagination, if a cool night.
Write one word. Repeat the above and write a second word on a second line, then a third word on a third line.
Then write one sentence of at least ten words for each word.
Now work it into a poem with the sound, look, touch and smell of the moment. Good luck. Richard
Richard L. Provencher
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i tried to make something up
Permalink Submitted by alice sunderland on
i tried to make something up once about the sunset. had some ideas eg. the day changing into its night clothes and blushing cos i was watching. couldnt string enough together to make anything of it tho.
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