The Anointing
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By Silver Spun Sand
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A whisper of a breeze
wafts the muslin drapes
as, at long last, he sleeps.
She stifles a sob;
crêpe-de-Chine roses
in a cloisonné vase
faintly flutter – lift,
but a wafer-thin
layer of grief...strokes
his cheek, wet with her tears –
too soon bruised by the world.
Hope’s flown north
for the winter with a flock
of wild geese; its darkling wing
eclipsing a sickle moon.
She defies a devilish dawn
dare creep across the sheets
with him, still warm
in her embrace; kisses
his feet, as the day
he was born.
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Such a delicate expression of
Such a delicate expression of grief and beautifully portrayed scene. I feel afraid to intrude with my clumsy observations, but your words are as lovely as they are sad. The second stanza could be a poem in its own right.
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This brought to mind Gillian
This brought to mind Gillian Clarke's 'White Rose's.' The way that you convey true shades of grief through the regular- those flowers, a bedside, an unwanted dawn is startling. The last lines made me reel, so beautiful.
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