Open Mind

By prettyrose

Mon, 21 Oct 2013
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14 comments
 

Judge me not for the way I dress,

Or the color of my hair,

Nor the Country I was born.

 

Only for what's inside,

and how I treat mankind.

I understand your fear,

Of something new, or

Unclear.

 

But unless we find a way

To disolve these unfavorable,

Thoughts,I fear

We will all be deprived,

And produce the next generation

Of  ignorance and unkind.

 

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Submitted by Art of the Diver on

Nice message, well conveyed... thank you for sharing... Rob

Submitted by prettyrose on

Hi Rob :) I hope your ok or best you can be!

 

Thank you so much for taking the time for reading my work and your comment is appreciated :).

I feel I could of done it better, but these days even sitting using a laptop isn't the easiest of tasks.

But glad you liked it!

 

Keep Smiling

Keep writing :)

smiley Keep Smiling

Keep Writing xxx

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on

Hello there, Pretty Rose.  Nice to read you again.  

End of first line of the  last stanza you a need a space between 'a' and 'way'...by the waysmiley

As Rob says, an emotive message, well penned.

 

Tina

 

Submitted by prettyrose on

Hi Tina smiley Thank you so much for your kind words and help, it is always appreciated of such a talented writier as yourself. I have really missed my, writing home and all that write on here :) I hope to be back more often.

 

Glad you liked it and I may teak it here and there over the next few days or so, so please feel free to add your thoughts if I do.

 

Keep Smiling

Keep Writing smiley

smiley Keep Smiling

Keep Writing xxx

Submitted by scratch on

Lovely poem Prettyrose.

 

Submitted by prettyrose on

Hi Scratch, i hope your ok :)

 

Thank you for taking the time to read it Scratch&glad you liked it, I like your username, brillsmiley.

 

Keep Smiling

Keep Writing.

smiley Keep Smiling

Keep Writing xxx

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Hi Prettyrose, some wise words here in this poem. Food for thought,  I very much enjoyed reading.  Jenny.

 

Submitted by prettyrose on

Hi Jenny smiley, I hope your as good has you can be.

 

Thank you so much for your lovely comments and taking the time to read it.

It's great to be writing again and hopefully flowing like I use too, even if not my best work lol.

 

Take care

 

Keep Smiling

Keep Writing :))))

smiley Keep Smiling

Keep Writing xxx

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Yes, well put and thoughtful, Prettyrose.
'I understand your fear, Of something new, or Unclear.'
 made me think how we need to make more effort when the outward person is from a different background, upbringing, and the body language is a bit different, so easy to make assumptions and not seek to understand one another.
Rhiannon

 

Submitted by prettyrose on

Aww thank you Rhiannon smiley I appreciate all you said and although short, I hoped it did come across, that I had thought about it, which I did, but I wasn't in the position to do any more, but I will probbaly add or tweak it, so let me know what you think if I do.

 

smiley Keep Smiling

Keep Writing xxx

Submitted by sappho on

Short but powerful. I like it a lot

Submitted by prettyrose on

Hi sappho,smiley Thank you for taking the time to read my work, it is appreciated.

I am glad you like it and yes I agree short, but I had to stop typing, so will have more i'm sure so it may be revised.

 

You made me laugh Sappho, as your comment 'short but powerful' was once how I had been described,smileylol.So thank you for the laugh too :))))

 

smiley Keep Smiling

Keep Writing xxx

Submitted by Bee on

This is so nice. Good thoughts well put.

Bee

Submitted by prettyrose on

Thank you Bee smileyfor reading my poem and for your lovely comments, it means alot!!!! I hope your well.

 

Keep Smiling

Keep Writing :))))))

smiley Keep Smiling

Keep Writing xxx