When you take her out
By mikilowe
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when you take her out,
you'll give her wine to drink-
red wine-
that will stain her lips purple
and blacken the clefts
between her gums and her teeth
And as she smiles, revealing
the gruesome, but unaware rows
of ivory dyed violet she'll be
bare- stripped-
from her elegant ease, at
the mercy of you're endearment.
You'll tilt you're head, charming,
at belle who beams like the shy cheshire cat
you'll entice her with a promise
somewhere pretty, with a view, you and i.
we'll go
you will paint her with your best words
despite that besmirched grin
to soften her mouth to what you'll
snatch-softly,
saying
oh, you're teeth are black
your lips are soiled
but don't worry my love
my heart too, is black.
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stripped-
stripped-
from her elegant ease, at
the mercy of you're endearment.
Loved that line.
Makes me wonder what happened to bring these these two to this point.
Well done, mikilowe.
Rich
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You nicely intertwine the
You nicely intertwine the pretense and frivolity of the moment. It is a tell tale heart poem written in jest! I like the smooth, free-flowing vibe of the poem.
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