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Cherry

By Marionella

Sat, 30 Nov 2013
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8 comments
 

REMOVED FOR COMPETITION

Certificate 18
Story

Comments

Submitted by scratch on

I hope that this dosen't sound patronising - it's certainly not meant to - but this is very good writing at any age but for a fourteen year old it really is of the highest quality.  Very good piece indeed.

 

Submitted by Marionella on

Wow, thank you!

Submitted by luigi_pagano on

An excellent piece, skilfully crafted.

 

Submitted by Marionella on

Thank you!

Submitted by Denzella on

Marionella,

This is an amazing piece of writing.  I didn't know you were only fourteen until I read Scratch's comment.  Congratulations on a job well done.

Moya

 

Submitted by Marionella on

Thank you Moya. That means a lot.

Submitted by Kizzy on

A perfectly captured voice. Your writing has a naturally poetic rhythm - the last line is one I want to read aloud. Stunning.

Kizzy

Submitted by Marionella on

Thank you, Kizzy.  Your comment made my day.  Really, truly did.