Mornings

Cherry

By Silver Spun Sand

Mon, 13 Jan 2014
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11 comments
 
She takes her coffee black –
takes a shower; steps into
her Dior panties, with satin
bows on, fastens her Chantelle 
brassiere with guipure lace.
 
Unclips her hair from its chignon –
lets it fall – do its own thing,
tendrils coyly flirting with her face.
 
Quips, ‘Bonjour’ to the cat
as she makes the bed – this
white, winter morning...white
as the sheets – sunlight streaked.
 
Clutching a commotion
of carmine-pink camellias,
and a dizziness of daffodils
her hint of a whisper of a dress
swishes as she minces – all
 
kitten-heeled and pony-tailed, 
and you could hear a pin drop...
on the Bedpan line; namely
the eight-thirty – fast, 
to King’s Cross. 
Certificate PG
Poem
Silver Spun Sand Poems
Romance

Comments

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on

Hi there, bb..  I guess that's one way of looking at it, as they saysmiley

Many thanks, and I hope your Tuesday is a good one.

Tina

 

Submitted by Bee on

So delicately visual. 

Loved this.

Bee

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on

Many thanks, Bee.  Much appreciated.

Tina

 

Submitted by Richard L. Prov... on

So that's why women look so beautiful, eh? Great poem Tina.

Richard L. Provencher

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on

Great to hear from you, Richard, and I hope lthe New Year is treating you, and yours, kindly.

Many thanks...and hey - maybe I gave too many secrets awaysmiley

Tina

 

Submitted by Richard L. Prov... on

Tina, you gave my wife some ideas. Ha. Ha. R.

Richard L. Provencher

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on

Gosh...glad to hear it, Richard...I thinksmiley

Tina

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

You gave some wonderful...vivid observations in this poem Tina. Almost flirting with the reader.  I loved the Frenchness of it too.

Jenny.

 

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on

Glad you picked up on that general flirtiness, Jennysmiley  

Pleased you enjoyed, and I really appreciate your telling me in such a delightful way.

Merci beaucoupwink

Tina

 

Submitted by VeraClark on

These comments are high ratio of males...strange, that. She's an absolute sex kitten. The soft swish of your language made me salivate. I want to stare at her, absorb her beauty.

 

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on

Feel free, Vera...feel freesmiley