Letter to a friend

By Julian Robinson

Tue, 21 Jan 2014
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To tease you with tea with words and words only

To please you with pleas to come when your ready

To know what I say is not what it seems

To see what I know is not what it means

To hear what I think is not what I dream

To touch what I drink is not in the stream

Of thinking less thoughts or having less noughts

It hardly seems worth writing.

Certificate 18
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Comments

Submitted by scratch on

Hey Julian!  That's better.  It's a good poem.  I like the cheeky rhyme and the insouciance of the piece.  If I've misinterpreted I apologise.  

Welcome to ABCtales.

 

Submitted by Kizzy on

I am reading and re-reading. Always a good sign.

Kizzy

Submitted by Julian Robinson on

Thank you Kizzy!

I got a little confused with the title, but it doesn't matter. It started as a poem and ended as a letter. . . very strange.

Julian Robinson

Submitted by Julian Robinson on

Thank you scratch, no you haven't misinterpreted the poem. I was certainly feeling carefree when I wrote it, and a little nervous. Insouciance is a lovely word. Thanks for the welcome, too!

Julian Robinson

Submitted by scratch on

You're very welcome Julian.

 

Submitted by VeraClark on

What a fizzy, light poem with some deceptive teasing.

 

Submitted by Julian Robinson on

Cool, I love the word fizzy! Thank you VeraClark

Julian Robinson

Submitted by jolono on

Like the rhyming and the rhythm of this Jules. It has a "happy" style about it.If that makes sense?

 

Submitted by Julian Robinson on

Thank you jolono, yes it began as a fumble of shortened word endings and beginings of sorts and muddled its way in a logical sense and finished is journey with a smile. Thanks.

Julian Robinson