crunching crocus's haiku

By alphadog1

Thu, 27 Feb 2014
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Crunching crocus's 
In the ice cold winter sun: 
Now leaves an echo.

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Submitted by MAGAMED.MT on

Love it. The crocus is an incredible flower. Seeing their purple heads peering at the surface from under the snow, you think to yourself how something so beautiful and dainty can handle this climate better than you. cheeky

Submitted by alphadog1 on

thanks, yeah I thought so. 

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Enjoyed. The alliteration brought out the cold! Rhiannon

 

Submitted by alphadog1 on

I've been -sort of inspired by this form recently, having read Kerouac's  the form  seems  to create a frozen moment and I like that.