Sian

By prettyrose

Fri, 14 Mar 2014
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6 comments
 

With the sun so bright
And our Welsh wind so calm
Its hard to believe
Your not here....

Taken so soon from this
Beautiful land we cant
Believe you've gone.
As the tears roll down,
my sad tired face,
I remember the times we
Laughed,With your amazing smile,
And caring ways,
You made us all relax.

It seems so unfair.
That I can't turn around
And see you standing there.
But our memories and love for you,
Will never depart,from our aching,
Broken hearts!!!

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Comments

Submitted by Bee on

A lovely tribute, Trish, and a sweet poem.

Bee

Submitted by prettyrose on

smileyHi Bee, I hope your well,

 

Thank you Bee,it means a lot your lovely comments, I always look for not only your work, but comments and suggestions, which I value smiley

 

I first did this poem as lyrics,a slow mellow type but with a up beat tone, if you can understand what I mean lol.

 

Take care

Trish x

smiley Keep Smiling

Keep Writing xxx

Submitted by hudsonmoon on

How terribly sad, Prettyrose. I know the feeling well. Well done here.

Rich

 

Submitted by prettyrose on

smileyHi Hudsonmoon, I hope your well.

 

Yes it was and still is. It happened four years ago but every day Sian is missed.angelBut birthday's, Christmas, mother's day allsorts of occasions' make it even hardersadBut we all keep going for the loved one's, friends, people that touch/ed our hearts or minds.!!!!!!

 

Thank you so much for reading my work and your lovely comments, it means a lot.

 

Take care

 

Trish

smiley Keep Smiling

Keep Writing xxx

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

This is very sweet, Trish. Do you live in Wales? Rhiannon

 

Submitted by prettyrose on

smileyAww that's nice of you to say Rhiannonw. I appreciate your comments.

 

And not now, but I use to, but hopefully going back soonsmiley

 

Take care

 

Trish

smiley Keep Smiling

Keep Writing xxx