The Ebb and Flow at the Manicured Resort
By a102866
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A green-shaded garden
stitched on a sculpted enclave
varnished with evergreen shingles
bristles a palapa of sheltered dreams
hedged by a pearly-white strand
fenced in by a briny stew of gurgling
waves that hem the dark shadows
On the milk-white beads
graded by pauper hands
hired by mercenary shills
to cushion tourist heels
only a few stragglers plod
even fewer feet kick up
the dingy, briny surf
Meandering to the oval center
a horde of tawny tourists
recline in cement bliss
lapping up filtered chlorine
and tropical concoctions
Torn between my eco-pretensions
and a genteel, pampered strain
I reluctantly side with raw nature
shuffling down to the fresh-raked sand
to garnish the ambient rhythms
of the winsome, trolling surf
Once the stinging, itchy grains
penetrate my toe crevices
and the smell from the briny pot
burns my sterile nostrils
my ambling trek halts
and my fabricated senses flare
leaping out into the falling tides
My discerning eyes explore
the rasping, capsizing waves
as my tender mind recalls
the graphic movie stills and
the blood-tinged news print
dredging up the stunned faces
of the unsuspecting accosted
who had been bludgeoned
by shark missiles and stung
by the tentacles of jelly fish
In mock horror, I turn away
recoiling at the dark tides
heading for the sterile environs
of the still, transparent pools
banding with the contented loiterers
trading the rancid, saline dip
for a soothing chlorine drip
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Your writing is very
Your writing is very concentrated (and I am used to being so to some extent myself - never want to waste people's time!), and I struggle sometimes to keep up with your tumbling images, but this comparison was really interesting, and especially liked 'shark missiles' and 'trading the rancid, saline dip for a soothing chlorine drip'
Rhiannon
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