The Termini Flower
By socialeaf
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And there she was,
between platforms.
Withered face, deep set blue eyes,
veiled hair and a toothless smile.
I’d seen her in stories.
The tiny foil folded flower
she held for me
hushed Rome Termini.
Painstakingly created,
juxtaposing her leathery hands.
I plucked it from the unlikely delicateness of her fingers
and thanked her sincerely.
Faux goodwill melted from her face,
as my naivety dawned on us both,
her hands formed a heart-sized bowl.
The suspended station click-clacked back to a roar.
Money!
She stabbed
Money!
I tried to give the flower back,
but she let it fall.
And as it disintegrated
into mere trash on the station floor,
she pinched me and drew blood.
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Beautiful. I loved all the
Beautiful. I loved all the details so delicately etched in.
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Such a well captured moment.
Such a well captured moment. I love the narrator's innocent perception of beauty, the flash of goodwill, as it gives way, immediately, into the old pool of venality.
Beautifully done socialeaf - keep them coming!
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