A Dazzling Smile

By luigi_pagano

Sat, 05 Jul 2014
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6 comments
 

I’d like to introduce you
to my latest squeeze.
So delicate and sensitive
that I feel at ease.
A new dazzling smile
is further evidence
of my happiness
and renewed confidence.
My mouth which has been
quite busy of late
is much refreshed
and is feeling great.
No longer vulnerable,
it now has protection
from all the nasty bugs
and oral infection.
So you can understand
that I’d regret my haste
if I changed or discarded
my favourite toothpaste.

© Luigi Pagano 2014

Certificate 12
Poem
Are you being versed?
Humour

Comments

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Neat fun - as long as they don't stop producing the new favourite! I did wonder if you meant to put 'discarded' on the last but one line. I expect it's fine either way, just found myself wondering if you had meant to put that. Rhiannon

 

Submitted by luigi_pagano on

You are right, Rhiannon. My finger stopped two characters short. I blame my laptop, sometimes it seems to skip letters. Anyway, no matter as there is always a kind soul who points out the failings. Thanks, therefore, Rhiannon not only for reading but also for bringing to my attention.

Luigi x

 

Submitted by Bee on

I agree with Rhiannon - this was a fun read.

Bee

Submitted by luigi_pagano on

Cheers Bee. Getting more and more difficult to find new topics to write about but relieved that I was able to produce one more offering. Thanks for the feedback.

Luigi x

 

Submitted by prettyrose on

smileyHi Luigi, I hope your well. I love this, fun and didn't expect you were talking about toothpaste laughwhich I like that twist.

 

Keep up your humor its brilliant, like your other workyes

 

Take Care

Trish x

smiley Keep Smiling

Keep Writing xxx

Submitted by luigi_pagano on

Dear Trish, your comment has made my day. So pleased to hear from you. I am well and hope that you are likewise in good health. Grateful for your support at all times.

Luigi smiley