the bench
By maisie
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The Bench.
I saw the sun rise,
from the bench at the core of the garden.
The first beams of
light span out like a half turned wheel -
exploded the myth –
that night could hold on, past the bird's
excitement: the
reality of the garden. Idealism contrived.
.
I sat with a cup of
tea: lost in my thoughts, soaked in sunlight,
early dew spilled
over the rush of roses, and spider's spangle silvery threads,
amongst the thorns.
I brushed my leg on the side of the wooden plank
felt the hardness of
it, the pliability of it, the softness of it, as real as imagination.
.
The Bee's content in
their commands were diving into and out of the trees
ready for the
exploration explained by their Queen. I bow to her
as she waves from
the Hive. Large and unembarrassed by her size.
An Icon amongst her
faithful. Where is the viability study of such
a large family? Was
time and motion suitably examined?
.
I give up the bench
to the insects, and the occupants of the garden,
inside lays the
computer and movement of mind. The tea is cold.
Inside: no sunshine,
no rush of sweet air, conversation as stilted,
as last night's
cheese is a nightmare of unresolved confrontations.
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The contrast of escape to the
The contrast of escape to the garden peace, observation and imagination, with the tension of everyday struggles of communications and misunderstandings of relationship interestingly portrayed, Maisie. Rhiannon
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There is something delicate
Hi Maisie.
There is something delicate and wistful about this poem that I really liked. I thought the way you switched tenses back and forth made it interesting, too. I found I had to really think about that.
Liked and enjoyed.
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