Alice Travels.
By Silent Laughter
Fri, 12 Sep 2014
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A cat lounges on a b
It observes the world in silence.
A girl walks down the p
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She observes the world in wonder.
Which direction should I travel in?
That depends on where you would like to end.
It doesn't matter where-
Then it doesn't matter which way you choose to go.
-so long as I get some
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You're sure to do that.
You must only continue
w a l k i n g.
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Very inventive and original.
Very inventive and original. Word spacing could be off-putting? It's akin to a chapter in David Levithan's 'The Realm of Possibility'.
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