A New School Year
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By jamescasaki
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A new school year
All the students were excited for the new school year, they ran out of the bus and saw a sign in front of the school Saying 'Do not enter or walk past this sign'. All the students laughed they knew it was the teacher but she didn’t come out. They were at the wrong part of the school and the teacher was waving at them on the other side. “Miss what happened to this entrance today? We need to come in this entrance.” ”We our going on a field trip." All the kids screamed "to where." "It’s a big surprise I’ll give you a few clues in the lesson. Ok we are all going to a place where dreams come true where all kids want to go." A boy named Nathan put his hand up” I know where we are going to, the cinema. No. it’s on an airplane.” All the kids looked at each other and said, “no way.” All the kids stood up” Disney World” said Luke, who was a really funny boy and everybody started laughing and screaming his name. “Yes you’re right Luke.” They all stopped cheering and screamed. “Ok we our leaving tomorrow morning.” A boy named Carlos woke up in the class “where are we going?” he asked yawning. “Wait where you sleeping in my class?” “Yes.” ”Then I’m not telling you what I said.” ”Carlos, we are going to Disney world” said Luke. He said “Oh cool” and fell back to sleep on the table. All the students laughed they crept out and popped a balloon in his ear he screamed “fire alarm! Fire alarm! Everybody leave the class.” Carlos ran out of the classroom. “Ok everybody its home time” said the teacher, “we are going to have an early morning start. I have paired you up with a buddy from another school.” The next morning all the kids were excited because they were going to Disney world and they would meet a new friend as a buddy. James walked in and saw a boy with a guitar. The teacher said James this is your buddy for the trip his name was called charley. He will be on the x factor next year so I thought he would be a good choice for you because you love music and you like to sing pop music so does charley. Anyway, we better get going. They got on the bus, after 12 hours they arrived at Disney world. Charley and James got out of the bus to meet the other volunteers. These are my friends I’m auditioning on the x factor and where called only the young. They sang to James, then charley told the group James sings, a boy from his class came up to James and bullied him because he was different to all the other boys in school. All the other boys liked sports but he liked music the boy pushed him on the floor. Charley ran to help him up and said friends stick together.
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Hello Jamescasaki, welcome to
Hello Jamescasaki, welcome to ABC Tales. Shout if you're not sure of anything, it's a helpful place. I liked the solidarity of Charley and the weight of friendship in this tale, it ends on a high note. It feels a little rushed in places and you need to check the formatting - your dialogue would be better structured if you start speech sentences on new lines. Will look out for more of your tales.
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