Letters from the Dead
By Silver Spun Sand
Thu, 06 Nov 2014
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Snatches of lavender light
strafe the room as, incumbent,
you lie – thumb in mouth; moments
like these I like to look at you,
asleep and dreaming, perchance,
until poetry no longer matters
anymore; you are that unfinished
line...that word, that simile
for completeness.
The world goes away, somehow,
although it doesn’t really. I think
of your future sans me, of world peace,
of global warming, of your going
out in the snow without a coat on,
or in the sun without a hat...and
not just on the beach at Jaywick...
sand-castle building – heaven forbid.
I think about other things, too...
but mostly how happy I’ve been
since you came along and I pray
you never get your nipples pierced
least of all your tongue,
and as for tattoos, I know I’m not
the one to talk, but yours, I hope
would be tasteful, like mine, and
your lovers, because...yes, in time
you will have them, one day will enjoy
the journeys they take, and the stories
they’ll find in your skin. The best-selling
novel, never written.
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So real Tina...
... pictured your hand on the cot and the love of a family member related to the precious sleeping jewel of hope. Always a pleasure to create my own images from your descriptions as they are never didactically given. Stay fabulous! $
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Wonderful, your words feel
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Wonderful, your words feel like a blessing.
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