New Year Text Message
By love_writing
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I received a text today from someone unknown.
The message did not download from the sender.
But the date said 01/01/1970.
Four years before I was born.
Twenty- four years
before the first text
was ever even sent.
Was it from mum,
telling me how happy
carefree and in love she was?
Smiling as she text in a wispy patterned knee length dress
with her flame red hair piled high on top of her head,
kohl eyeliner tracing her big sparkling doe eyes,
tapping her foot as five, four, three, two, one
was sung out from behind her, an arm slung around her waist.
Or was it from dad,
sending a picture of him merry,
ole blue eyes shining, smiling
holding a big bottle of fizz, a jaunty red party hat on,
grabbing the waist of the patterned dress
Saying ‘Cheers, Happy New Year!
Love you!
From Mum and Dad xxxxx'
This was before you or I.
Or those that came after.
Maybe that message said
that once things were good.
Once there was love.
Once hands were held.
That was before you or I.
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love the idea here. the
love the idea here. the mystery of what we know before we knew I suppose. I'm a little confused by who the you is in the final stanza. But the images in the middle are really great.
Thanks for reading. I am grateful for your time.
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Oh, god, sorry, It was me
Oh, god, sorry, It was me that sent it. I was just messing around that day with an old-fashioned telephone pulled out of a skip. An aerial and I consulted the young physic's guide to chatting up girls and hey ho away the message...
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Sad and mysterious all at
Sad and mysterious all at once! I loved the idea of the text sent from the past.
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