Nameless
By Basket case
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The most beloved night coming on
with it a chill in the darkness
a cold shiver ran down my spine
reminded me, it's time to date
Laid down and closed my eyes
eyelid blocked my sight
darkness awaken my memories
I was in the selection
the best encounter scene
It was a beautiful night
we sat in the love corner, at a bar
you looked at me, full of love
your finger softly crossed my cheek
mixed with the scent of cigarettes
flipped my heart
That was a cold night, with icy beer
you hold my hands, touch and kiss
like a baby
cold lips crushed on warm hands
there was a spark, through my heart
I named it - LOVE
what a wonderful name, I never gave
A cold breeze, comes down
from the crack of window
hit on my face
cold winds meets fresh tears
bring me to the reality
Open my eyes
night, still a night
but you, never you
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Hi there, Bc...a lovely poem.
Hi there, Bc...a lovely poem.
Maybe, third stanza, third line, think about saying either:-
'You watched me', or 'You looked at me'.
An evocative write, and the last three lines, magical
Tina
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Perfection And you're more
Perfection And you're more than welcome.
Tina
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Great love scene, natural
Great love scene, natural innocence, starting in a great environment, ending cold, reality, again.
What can I say? Great words, baket!
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'A cold breeze, comes down
'A cold breeze, comes down
from the crack of window
hit on my face
cold winds meets fresh tears
bring me to the reality'
I liked this stanza. Ithink it could be made into a poem by itself.
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