Hello Mr Magpie
By harveyjoseph
Sun, 15 Mar 2015
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Hello Mr Magpie
We're not so unalike, you and I
People turn their heads away
When we pass by...
With our eyes
Looking for things abandoned on the ground
Bad luck seems to
Follow us around
There's no silver
I can't find no gold
In my eyes
A story that's never to be told
One for sorrow
Can't find no joy
Hard to think once,
I was a bonnie, bright eyed boy
Hello Mr Magpie
We're alike you and I
People turn away
When we pass by...
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I like your melancholic take
Permalink Submitted by Philip Sidney on
I like your melancholic take on the old rhyme.
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me too - I enjoyed this! One
Permalink Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on
me too - I enjoyed this! One suggestion: should it be unalike, instead of unlike?
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