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Gold cherry

By littleditty

Wed, 04 Mar 2015
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The reeds take on the movements
of long gone swans when I said
something is always part of something else
as you are a part of me -

The murmuration of starlings'
whaleshaped curve of fin following
the movement of oceans,
the way I follow you - at night,

the moon, cinnamon to nutmeg
as you are black, the black
to my brown curl, brown skin -

when you are black to silver,
a dandelion clock - and I'm your
grey haired girl.

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Submitted by VeraClark on

Firstly, lovely to see you after a long time. Secondly, this is scenic, delicate and full of love.

 

Submitted by Philip Sidney on

Beautiful images.

Submitted by scratch on

This is our facebook and twitter pick of the day!

Get a fantastic reading recommentdation every day.

 

Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on

how lovely this is, and what a perfect pick!

 

Submitted by Stephen Thom on

'whaleshaped curve of fin' / 'the way I follow you' this is wonderful, really balanced and lovely, pretty phrases and moments

 

Submitted by Bee on

Beautiful.

Bee

Submitted by littleditty on

Thanks all. Bit limited here with just a phone, and things have changed. If I press the 'great feedback' buttons by your names, what happens? For fear of explosions, thanks for reading and commenting all x

 

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on

Missed this one before, ld.  A gem.

Tina xx