Where wild water flows
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By Deliberately Evolving
Sun, 03 May 2015
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Love is like a babbling brook
Or sparkling stream
Springing forth from
Cracks in mountainsides
Though soft and gentle,
Flows caressing paths
But cuts through
Flint as hard as steel.
No one questions
The water pure.
Why or how or
From where it flows
But accepts it.
Pure and unsullied
Refreshing parched lips
And weary soul
No one really feels the need
To stop beyond
Brief admiration
Or quenched necessity
It flows, it's there, that's enough
For you, for me
It's all we need
Accept what we have...
Pure untainted love
To refresh parched soul
And weary heart.
I flow
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Love is elemental. Your
Permalink Submitted by london_calling79 on
Love is elemental. Your enjambment is well used to replicate the flow. Welcome!
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Love seeps and flows and this
Love seeps and flows and this is very fluid in its movement. There's something joyful and accepting about it. I really like it.
Bee
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A beautiful image.
Permalink Submitted by Philip Sidney on
A beautiful image.
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love as wild water, never
Permalink Submitted by tibi popovici on
love as wild water, never imagine it like this, but I must say it's amazing. Great poem!
T.
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A thoughtful picture and form
A thoughtful picture and form, and thought-provoking over the purpose and labour of true outgoing love for another, desiring their good. Rhiannon
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Next time I'm walking in the
Delightful.
Next time I'm walking in the hills and pause to drink from a stream, I shall think of this poem and save a few drops to sip later
torscot
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