On Losing a Lake
By socialeaf
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Most of the children said
that once the lake dries up
and a cracked bed remains
the thing they will miss most
will be the reflections
they are used to seeing in the water
Catherine said she couldn’t imagine the peaks and the sky
not being rooted in an inverted image of themselves
That it was awful to think of them rising from the mere ground
I prompted the class in the direction
of being concerned for our source of fresh water being gone
What will we wash in?
How will farmers cope?
What will we drink?
But on a recount of raised hands after my intervention
the disappearance of the ability of the reservoir to reflect
won hands down again
After class at my desk their answer made me think
of death and of losing you my love
I don’t know why but it did
And the sense of it came rushing in like a flood
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So much to consider in this
So much to consider in this subtle poem, loss and the need to reflect. Beautiful and so very sad.
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Stunning. I love the journey
Stunning. I love the journey of this poem from the sea to the confines of a classroom all the way to internal thoughts. Great content precisely sketched.
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Haha the best ideas come from
Haha the best ideas come from avoidance! I feel your pain - GCSE exam time in England right now and moderation must be done...
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They must so value that
They must so value that reflective lake. If I've got their age right, I suppose they presume that their water needs will be met by adults, and don't give it much thought or feeling. The turn of your thoughts seems to be linked with their sense of loss of the companisonship of their familiar beautiful sight.
Very gently written. Rhiannon
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Beautifully written, amazing
Beautifully written, amazing how insightful children are and you reflected that well in this poem.
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