Mrs. Xu

Gold cherry

By socialeaf

Thu, 21 May 2015
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8 comments
 

Star anise

bubbles

from the opaque depth

of the pot on the stove

Like an expanding universe

 

Wooden spoon

dancing

Taps out a zestful tempo

on the silver rim

it rests on

 

Mrs. Xu

chopping

Here she shows her love

Lost in meditative concern

amid the wisps of steam

Certificate U
Poem
Leafnotes
Love

Comments

Submitted by Philip Sidney on

A character beautifully drawn in a few light strokes.

Submitted by socialeaf on

Thank you Philip! 

Roy 

 

 

Submitted by Bee on

Concise and delicately written.

Bee

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Submitted by socialeaf on

Wow! Thank you! 

Roy 

 

 

Submitted by Stephen Thom on

yeh agree with the above, love the sparseness and the images transferred through so few words - but such beautifully pretty word combinations - zestful tempo, opaque depth, expanding universe. comes together wonderfully, lovely poem :-)

 

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