Strangers
By chant
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Returning from my father’s house
red-berried branches scratching
the deck, a hand on your collar
the white guy hunkered opposite
scowling. A stoner sparks
an incense stick and the meditative
sky is soon puddling the city
into impressionistic fragments.
Second Life is no place to live;
still we talk of its islands.
The world’s terms and conditions
who the real winners are if any
no one knows. Yet, a Converse foot
on the seat rail, I see bushes
kneeling under rain, penitent passers-by.
Braking at the lights, a kid steps out
plastic umbrella in one hand
printed in bold on his t-shirt
Just Chill. We’ve no rainproofs
when our stop comes lope for shelter
shadows glancing street-lit walls.
@ianjmclachlan
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This sounds like where I used
This sounds like where I used to live. I like the staccato rythm of the poem that enhances the harshness of the reality of life in these environs.
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All the stark little details
All the stark little details and the urban touches make a gritty scene.
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I like the way it's all going
I like the way it's all going by and the way you wind this down makes it all the more real.
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