'Loyalty'

By Art of the Diver

Thu, 04 Jun 2015
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As writers and poets is it not our role to bring grace to the table of life? Great writers have the ability to share the fabrics weave over an entire journey in the company of unknown readers. Where I believe great poets share a scene or a moment within that journey. In limited lines, that scene, that moment, must be conveyed to our readers emotionally, seductively, vividly and passionately enough to be truly visualised, felt and found to be of value to them. As writers and poets there is always a humbleness attached to any artistic piece we have proudly penned, but there is a greater sense of love given and returned when that piece, irrespective of whether story or poem, carries the power to say to its readers; "You Own This!" And in response, they genuinely know that they do.

I hope, though not great, this piece can be found to be of some value to my readers. 'Loyalty' describes the daily grace offered by nature in a place where I once lived when young, called Puysegar Point. It is near the bottom of the earth, the most southern point of Fiordland, New Zealand. Wild then still, wild or still, depending on the mood of the ever present wind and great Southern Ocean.

 

‘Loyalty’

 

The wind in its destructive best

has turned another tranquil sea to raging ocean

It’s ‘notice-me’ energy now transferred

to each wave crashing into the rocks below

Shuddering in shock, land’s cliffs stand defiant

yet give up their weakest ground

 

Earth’s loyalty to the elements reflected

in each scar, each grain of dust blown

Yet the relentless wind takes, in self gratification

giving only a passing glance

Arrogantly howling, as it selfishly

betrays all those who would seek its loyalty…

 

*~ Pearldiver ~

 

Copyright © 2015 Art of the Diver with all rights reserved.

Certificate 12
Poem
Other Non-fiction
Nature

Comments

Submitted by Deliberately Ev... on

The ocean is an awe inspiring sight captured beautifully buy this powerful poem.

The beat of your heart is the mellifluent rhythm to my soul.

Submitted by tibi popovici on

First I must agree with you, writing it's an art(at least for me) - suppose because it's passion, it's live and love involved.

Like so much New Zeeland, so I think you spend so nice time there.

Regarding the poem, I think you made an interesting conflict - wind main character - of interests in nature, which i would never thought of. Great work!

T.

Submitted by Art of the Diver on

Hi Accidentallyexisting, thank you so much for your review and great comment. I will got my butt into gear and race out to buy it on eBay then... Appreciate your words also... take care

Rob

Submitted by Art of the Diver on

Hi Tibi, bring your fishing gear when you decide it's time. Thank you so much for your words... I appreciate them. Yes NZ is a bit cold atm being Winter, but that just gets the ski season under way early. The image I used is taken from about 30 metres away from my old home. Take care T

Rob

Submitted by Bee on

I found this exhilarating. Took me to the sea and gave me its power - experiencing the elements.  

Bee

Submitted by Armourpiercing Alien on

Full of energy.

Submitted by Art of the Diver on

Hi and Thank you Bee, believe me the elements at Puysegar Lighthouse seem to be engaged in a titanic battle among themselves, one Fire chooses to stay out of. The wind has many voices in this place where giant albertrosses just hang in the updraft above cliffs all day.. it's quite dangerous to stand underneath them sad Really appreciate your words Bee... take care

Rob

Submitted by Art of the Diver on

@ Armourpiercing Alien...

Thank you for taking the time to feel it... it is indeed a place full of energy. On rough days the waves get up to about 60 feet tall and the whole peninsular groans from the shuddering impact against the land. Take care

Rob

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Hi Rob,

just read this amazing poem and some of the comments, it left me speechless, as so much as already been said. The only thing I can add, is that you brought so much energy in your words, as you point out the sea can be your friend, but also an enemy. I cannot imagine how big those waves must be and to see them must be one hell of a buzz!

I feel so much more invigorated for reading, so thanks for sharing this one.

Jenny.

 

Submitted by Art of the Diver on

Hi Jenny,

thanks so much for reading, enjoying and commenting on this piece, it means a great deal coming from you M' Lady. Good to see you out and about, taking a break from your book (which we have to do sometimes). Yes, the fury and changeable moods of the Southern Ocean can be attested to by ever sailor who has risen to her challenge, renowned for huge 'double' waves she demands a toll. I really appreciate your kind words Jenny, you take care and finish your masterpiece

Rob

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Thankyou again Rob, for such encouragiing words, they mean a lot I promise.

Jenny.

 

Submitted by Art of the Diver on

My pleasure Jenny and I believe Congrats are in order.. I noticed in your comments to Tina that you've finished!  Yeaaaaaaaa.... Good on you mate!  Wow all those pencils and rubbers eh?  wink