Last Request
By EB
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Do not stand at my grave and drip
into the earth recalling me
as something better than I was;
I won't be there.
If I were to loiter, I wouldn't do it
in a graveyard, I'd head for somewhere
brighter to commence my days of death;
I'd choose for instance, peaceful oceans -
would not want a shoveled hole
with mourners dropping dirt onto my coffin,
sobbing - waling up a fuss;
I'd much prefer you laughed,
it's less off-putting - aesthetically speaking... and
in hopes you're thinking of cremation,
may I ask that I be scattered on a gusty wind
off the top of Beachy Head, or Buster Hill.
How exhilarating it would feel to fly
and fall as dancing dust
and to be part of our great universe...
Do not plan to stand at my grave and weep.
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This is a good last request.
This is a good last request. I will remember this.
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Great sentiment. A friend of
Great sentiment. A friend of mine unfortunately passed away recently and I'm sure he would have thoroughly agreed with you!
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Takes away the morbidity of
Takes away the morbidity of cemetry, graves, death. Makes death sound freeing. I really enjoyed this, thanks for sharing!
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Excellent
For a foreshadowing-of-death-poem this expands beyond the detail (yet still gives them) into the ambitions that should be fulfilled in life. Really very good. Excellent in fact.
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This is our joint poem of the
This is our joint poem of the week! Well done.
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bit of Dylan Thomas, rage,
bit of Dylan Thomas, rage, rage, don't go quietly into the night. A sentiment I trust. Why wallow when you can fly?
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