Slave
By chant
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Celts, Thracians, the man who’d
pledged himself as a bond slave
donated his son as collateral.
That July morning they gathered
in his shady colonnaded atrium
praying he’d friend them back, like
the small business they were pushing.
I had on my good tunic, an
“I have run away, catch me” collar
had dashed on dice and Alban
the dribble he'd mislaid.
Flush as Crassus, he lived in fear
someone would swipe his hoard
divide what no immortal could spend.
And just yesterday I’d caught him
petting a girl kidnapped
by Puntite pirates. Of course
she did not own her body
had no name, ancestors, goods.
Like me she had stood naked on
a turning stand while buyers
gawped and cupped their
bulging purses of gold aurei.
But he had a jealous wife; now
I was about a topsy-turvy world
him begging me to keep hush
grabbing my knee, calling me god
which often happens in tales.
@ianjmclachlan
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Comments
Fantastic poem. Nothing else
This is our poem of the week! Congratulations, chant.
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Interesting stuccato rhythm
Interesting stuccato rhythm which lends well to the subject.
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Brilliant work.
The phrases you use really add colour to the situation you describe. I really liked this.
Ed Crane
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An interesting tale, well
An interesting tale, well told!!
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