Treasure for Maureen
By loquaciousicity
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A midnight ship with silver sails
And hoisted flags with scarlet tails
Is whisked by winds of golden gales
Descending from the skies above.
And though the decks are wet and soaken,
Still the hull is swift and oaken
So the course remains unbroken,
Trailing wakes of turtledoves.
With storm departed, then no sooner
Comes, unseen, a pirate schooner
Neath the nighttime, light and lunar,
Pouncing with a push and shove.
Though hope seems lost, a cyclone saves
Dispersing foes and other knaves
With frothy foamy fisted waves
Which strike like leaden leather gloves.
Secured, the ship has safely landed
- Left behind, the pirates stranded -
Passers-by are smiling candid,
Knowing not the worth thereof.
For hidden in the wooden hold
Is treasure bursting unforetold
- Far more than diamonds, thyme and gold -
It brings unbound a brother’s Love.A midnight ship with silver sails
And hoisted flags with scarlet tails
Is whisked by winds of golden gales
Descending from the skies above.
And though the decks are wet and soaken,
Still the hull is swift and oaken
So the course remains unbroken,
Trailing wakes of turtledoves.
With storm departed, then no sooner
Comes, unseen, a pirate schooner
Neath the nighttime, light and lunar,
Pouncing with a push and shove.
Though hope seems lost, a cyclone saves
Dispersing foes and other knaves
With frothy foamy fisted waves
Which strike like leaden leather gloves.
Secured, the ship has safely landed
- Left behind, the pirates stranded -
Passers-by are smiling candid,
Knowing not the worth thereof.
For hidden in the hull and hold
Is treasure bursting unforetold
- Far more than diamonds, thyme and gold -
It brings unbound a brother’s Love.
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Comments
Excellent Pome.
Very well done indeed. I smiled at the alliteration. ( frothy foamy fisted waves )
Brilliant. I Really enjoyed this. Lucky Maureen.
Weeatfella.
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Well worked out again, Terry,
Well worked out again, Terry, making an enjoyably constructed read. Rhiannon
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Great rhythm in a well told
Great rhythm in a well told story made enjoyable with a catchy form.
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Lovely rhythm carrying the
Lovely rhythm carrying the reader along, and a rewarding end. Very much enjoyed it.
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A very well deserved POTD.
A very well deserved POTD. Really enjoyed the rhythm and rhyme of this. Can imagine it being read out loud in a busy pub with everyone having a pint in their hands! Brilliant.
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This the kind of poetry I love
Classic rhymes and rhythms, loved it, wonderful simple story compact and powerful really fun to read
Ray
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I very much enjoyed your poem
I very much enjoyed your poem. I love when poetry tells a story.
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