Summer

By cjm

Wed, 18 Nov 2015
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The wind rustles

the leaves outside

my window

The country

green and dewy

rolls beyond

Birds sing

children splash in the pool

 

 

 

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Submitted by Rhiannonw on

This would make a lovely journal entry. And each observation brings in touch or sound as well as colour. It somehow feels tantalizing that you could develop it a bit more. Rhiannon

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

I agree with Rhiannon, you've captured an idyllic scene here.

Jenny.