A Passing (IP)
By london_calling79
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Under silent cityscape penumbra
flits a linen shroud in billowing black.
It covers candles and the weeping liars.
Folds away empty sandwich trays.
In a pregnant room he rests,
darkening Polaroid. Posed, cut,
snipped to the inch of Eighties style, curls
once of fire now of ash.
Pilotless, abandoned
vessel, carcass, holding cell,
suffers one more slow effacement, a preparation
by fluid dripping Daliesque
on hollow teak. In the fire halo - hungry echoes,
creaks of wisdom in the yawning flame.
Starlings escape the faceless wind,
to roost in chimney’s wombing warmth.
Night arrives to veil the living in
snowed-in limbo. The melting trenches
blink wide, fissures gape, mirrors crack
exorcizing steam from gaping gutters.
He escapes.
Let the dying embers take his face,
his eyes that could ignite the night,
he was my world, creased, composed
once of fire
now of ash.
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Kind of grotesque.
Kind of grotesque. Interesting to use the language of birth in this moment of transformation. Such striking images and heart-felt end. Makes me queasy, but I'll have to read again.
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I really like the device
I really like the device "once of fire now of ash". Evokes the passing well. Enjoyed reading this, London_calling79.
Parson Thru
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So many amazing pieces from
So many amazing pieces from the Inspiration Point and it's only Sunday! This one certainly takes the theme and runs with it. I love the image of a darkening polaroid
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The last bit, did me in.
The last bit, did me in. Terrific.
Rich
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