SID AND NANCY

By YaseminB

Fri, 03 Mar 2017
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Sid and Nancy

 

Sid is an apostrophe of a man:

Wedged between characters,

Waiting to be fixed ,

A foetus in

A translucent membrane!

 

 

He discovers fame!

And one fix after another!

He becomes vicious!

Sid Vicious!

 

 

O Nancy!

The wide eyed girl from across

The sea;

Blonde, lovely and sexy!

She becomes his lover first,

Then the victim

 

Certificate PG
Poem
Other Fiction

Comments

Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on

I like the description of him as an apostrophe of a man. If you're looking for feedback, I would suggest losing the exclamation marks - I'm not sure why you've put them in.

 

Submitted by YaseminB on

Thanks so much for your feedback

Yasemin Balandi

Submitted by YaseminB on

Thanks so much for your feedback

Yasemin Balandi

Submitted by YaseminB on

Thanks so much for your feedback

Yasemin Balandi

Submitted by maggyvaneijk on

oh that opening line is wonderful!

 

Submitted by YaseminB on

Thanks Maggie

Yasemin Balandi