sunset park, oxford road


By JupiterMoon
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sunset park, oxford road
i used to sit in this park,
for the downing of the sun,
quelling the thirst
as it drew low,
tucking in the homeless
like paper-packed fish.
years having fled,
the stone feels flinty
in exactly the same way,
the changing grass
wears new anaemia,
the magpies chatter,
in a tongue i have unlearned,
the people, huddle in
to one another,
as tight as they ever did.
i sit alone.
it is colder than before.
the downing of the sun,
feels far more
permanent now.
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Standout beautiful - the
Standout beautiful - the melancholy, and the hint of worse to come is so finely painted. Really well done
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This is quietening in its
This is quietening in its power, language so well controlled and I admire how you draw tension. Its our Facebook and Twitter Pick of the Day.
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