CREPUSCULAR

By moonphish

Tue, 16 May 2017
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you and i, crepuscular
it's twilight that we crave
the moment at its melting point
the region of the brave
.
we like to live our lives on edge
yet crave the time to dwell
together, we're in heaven
but alone, we're thrown in hell
.
you and i, crepuscular
the moments that we share
are minuscule in length of time
but wide as open air
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Comments

Submitted by rosaliekempthorne on

Nice poem.  Good language, especially "moment at its melting point" "region of the brave".  Also, the rhyme is sufficiently non-intrusive as to give the poem some rhythm but not to intrude on the content or to seem forced.

Submitted by moonphish on

thanks so much, rosalie....glad you enjoyed