Wrath
By rosaliekempthorne
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The anger drains away,
Running cold down a network of veins
Replaced by familiar hollowed out guilt,
By that voice
By the blood on his knuckles,
Condemnation written on bone.
She has soft eyes,
A colour that mixes hazelnut with citrine with autumn leaves and midwestern rust.
She busies herself in the kitchen and won’t look at him with those eyes.
Makes a show of drying the dishes.
“It’s all right. It’s nothing.”
She tilts her head away so he can’t see what he’s done.
Ice congeals in his heart,
It has nowhere else to go.
His chest aches with it, weighed down unto breaking.
He can see backwards, catches a glimpse in the mirror.
His fist reddened. The drunken leer. The trauma-maddened eyes.
Her voice used to tell him: don’t cry, don’t cry;
Now it would tell him - these eviscerating words:
You’re just like your father.
Picture credit/discredit: author's own work
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There's so much in this - the
There's so much in this - the reader suddenly realises that the picture needs to be viewed in a totally different way. This particular type of DV has its own complexities, and you've captured them so well here. A mother seeking to protect her child, and the hint at the lifetime of abuse she has already suffered. It's beautiful and chilling.
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This unsettling and
This unsettling and beautifully written poem is our Facebook and Twitter Pick of the Day! Please share/retweet if you've enjoyed it.
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A well crafted, poignant poem
A well crafted, poignant poem.
Jenny.
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Well deserved pick of the day
Well deserved pick of the day.
The way you have conveyed this is both sad and somewhat appealing. I like how you paint the mother, giving her a life, a way of beauty inspite of the abuse.
A haunting piece, made all the more so, because this happens every minute of everyday.
Pops ~xx~
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