Eliza
By _Hayley_
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She was the ocean.
Blue waves lapping against a face of sand,
freckles like sea shells,
driftwood brows.
He was the beach.
He was the seaweed tangling, groping her legs,
sea foam frothing from his lips.
He was the gritty sand between her toes
in her hair
clinging to her back
He wanted to suffocate her,
but she refused to drown herself.
She was the tide leaving the shore,
and unlike the ocean,
she was never one to come crawling back.
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Beautiful imagery, and the
Beautiful imagery, and the lilting rhythm goes so well with the subject matter.
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Has the sound of waves coming
Has the sound of waves coming in. Beautiful
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A great word picture, and the
A great word picture, and the metaphors are strong, never too contrived. Well done
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Beautiful writing!
Beautiful writing!
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