Winter wonderland

Cherry

By TonyC25

Fri, 29 Dec 2017
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9 comments
 

Walking slow

crunching snow

dripping trees

In park smattered many pied white bodies,

excited children building, cheeks aglow,

refreshed parents feeling togetherness grow

Energy flows,

can't resist splat at imaginary foe

Down path, branch snags me hat

eyeball innocent looking young girl

lovingly cradling whopping snowball

Spy frozen squirrel on bark

startled by shaggy shih-tzu that can shift

Robin on fence tops smile on face

Feel alive when Snowman offers twigged final embrace

Certificate 12
Poem
Nature

Comments

Submitted by TonyC25 on

 

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

You brought the scene to life. We had so much snow a fortnight ago, but have missed it this time. Sunshine and sharp air with fresh snow is very refreshing. I liked 'refreshed parents feeling togetherness grow' Rhiannon

 

Submitted by TonyC25 on

Cheers Rhiannon :) yes makes you feel alive

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

You've captured a christmas card scene in your poem. Great seasonal touch.

Jenny.

 

Submitted by TonyC25 on

Cheers Jenny :)

 

Submitted by TonyC25 on

Thank you for the cherries :) am well chuffed

 

Submitted by Ladylily on

Good un Tony, your imagination sparks in this poem,   Geraldine.

LadyLily

Submitted by Ladylily on

Good un Tony, your imagination sparks in this poem,   Geraldine.

LadyLily

Submitted by TonyC25 on

Cheers Geraldine beautiful day :)