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By socialeaf
Thu, 05 Apr 2018
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Eighteen years ago
in a field,
on the southern most
tip of Taiwan,
on this very night,
I turned around
and made braver
by beer,
began a conversation
with someone
that would turn out to
be you my love.
That evening
I tried to kiss you;
you thought I had something to say
as I leant in.
I still cringe.
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I like the choice of where to
Permalink Submitted by london_calling79 on
I like the choice of where to end the lines and the pace. A sweet memory.
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