A Sad Poem
By TheShyAssassin
Sat, 29 Sep 2018
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Hate seeps from love like air from a tyre.
Imperceptibly.
For love and tyres,
What's left is useless.
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I like this. An interesting
I like this. An interesting analogy. Those sudden blow-outs, too. And I've never found a puncture outfit that's worked for love.
New loves, though? New tyres? There can still be hope. So, maybe not a 'sad' poem, but a reflective one.
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