Convenient(?) Forgettery!

Cherry

By Rhiannonw

Thu, 15 Nov 2018
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‘Remember when …’
“Don’t bring that up again, Mum!”
‘I’m not about once more
to scold
of things you’d rather
weren’t retold!

… just a reminder
to remember …

the consequences
of offences,
for only fools
ignore good rules …
so don’t forget
to learn,
or else you’ll earn
unnecessary
double
trouble!’

[This week’s IP: remembrance}

 

Certificate U
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Children's
Inspiration Point (work that responds to our weekly writing cue)

Comments

Submitted by Di_Hard on

brilliant! I like the word forgettery too :0)

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thanks, Di! Based on some memories! Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Di_Hard on

"only fools ignore good rules" keeps going round in my head :0) you're a genius at making memoable lines, the opposite of forgettery!

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

I couln't claim genius, but thanks for the feedback. Rhiannon

 

Submitted by hilary west on

Snappy little ditty that tells it as it is. Amusing and reminiscent of childhood !

Hilary   laugh

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thanks, HIlary, glad you enjoyed! Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thanks for cherries! Rhiannon

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Nice one Rhiannon. yes

Jenny.

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thanks, Jenny. Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Jane Hyphen on

This is cute. It's a gentle poke with a sharp point but some kids never feel it do they. I too love the word forgettery, the very young and the very old know they can get away with a bit of forgettery.

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thanks, Jane. I put the question mark after 'Convenient' because though thinking it convenient to forget, hopefully many find that it is actually more convenient to remember such lessons learnt! just as it can be grace to get 'found out'! Rhiannon