The Hills

By D Marie

Thu, 24 Jan 2019
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 Hills

 

  I've often seen

    on a cloudy day

       when every time

         the sun appears

           streams of yellow

             pour down their sides

               flooding the land below

Certificate U
Poem
Nature

Comments

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

I like the idea of the sun pouring down the sides of hills, it's like a painting, very visual.

Jenny.

 

Submitted by D Marie on

Thank you Jenny. Appreciate your positive feedback.

 

Submitted by Tom Brown on

This is really lovely Donna! So beautiful in its simplicity. The kind of poem I most like to read.

Keep well! Tom

 

Submitted by D Marie on

Thanks Tom, I am flattered.