Stairway To Heaven

By skinner_jennifer

Sat, 20 Apr 2019
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10 comments
 

Early years give meaning to passions

related desires of possible chance...

feeling light as downy feathers,

enthusiasm hovering – prowling

like wolves hungry for

responsive contact,

 

games were easy to play

his stance so imposing

as a lion he sauntered,

you would be his lioness

removing veil of innocence,

those eyes flirting – blazing

with sexual ardour,

captive in a higher realm,

 

souls already connected,

yet physically strangers

still unsure, then this

beast moves in

reflected in her eyes,

 

lioness besotted

wild with intent...

submitting to gesture,

mounting beloved

karma stimulates,

they become one

now connected

in pleasure.

 

 

 

 

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Comments

Submitted by celticman on

there's a lot of heaven in heaven and here, jenny 

 

Submitted by forest_for_ever on

Interesting  and great to read.

 

Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on

I like this Jenny. Great choice of song! It'll be playing in my head for the rest of today now...

 

Submitted by luigi_pagano on

It is heavenly to ascend the ladder when in love, Jenny, but pity those who encountered a snake and slithered back to earth. smiley

Good poem, by the way.

Luigi xx

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Thanks for the read Jack, glad I could bring a bit of heaven to you. wink

Jenny. smiley

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

I'm  really pleased you found this interesting forest_for_ever, it was fun to write.

I do appreciate you letting me know.

Thanks.

Jenny. smiley

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Hi insert,

glad you liked and thank you for letting me know.

Jenny. smiley

 

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Ah! The game of snakes and ladders! I never thought of that one Luigi. You are certainly right with your analogy.

I'm grateful for the read and the feedback. Many thanks.

Jenny. smiley

 

Submitted by hilary west on

Hi Jenny,

This is very physical and passionate. Is this written after the ardour has died? Very well done, Jenny !

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Hi Hilary,

I was thinking of the passion building then the adour leaving that contented feeling.

Appreciate the read and thank you for letting me know you enjoyed.

Jenny. smiley