Looking up
By Penny4athought
Tue, 03 Sep 2019
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Deep blue
Darkly shaded
Impenetrable background
Moonlit clouds and nebulae
Romanticized by poets
The space above
Beckons all to dream
What lies beyond
Those starry, starry skies
Eyes search for the architect
Endless meditation
Fuels deep contemplation
Soulful conversations
With self
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Hi Penny,
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Hi Penny,
I like your poem and the dreamy idea of gazing up and wondering what's out there feeding your imagination.
Jenny.
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I've just been to a new van
I've just been to a new van Gogh exhibition - what they call an 'immersive experience', with a sort of son et lumiere to start with and then a virtual reality trip through some of the paintings. Your poem reminds me of his starry night skies. You evoke a beautiful atmosphere with this piece.
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