Colours for Kids 11)

Cherry

By Rhiannonw

Sat, 05 Oct 2019
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14 comments
 

Bananas and daffodils,
egg yolk and butter,
little chicks and lemons,
and the petals of a sunflower,
gold rings and Laa-Laa,
sweet corn and mustard,
a fireman’s helmet
and a bowl of custard.

Certificate U
Poem
Colours for Kids
Children's

Comments

Submitted by Penny4athought on

Adorable, the tempo and beat of this sounded like a nursery rhyme. I loved it and could see it with illustrations on a page in a children's book of poems.

Penny4athought

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thank you, Penny. That's so nice to know. I've really enjoyed tackling these little verses set off by 2 inspiration points. Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on

This made me think of that song 'these are a few of my favourite things' in the sound of music - and how perfect to end it with custard somehow! I bet there's an art student somewhere out there who would love to illustrate this series

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thank you, Insert. Lovely, appreciated comment. I enjoyed the custard comkng in then too! Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thanks for the cherries! Rhiannon

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Great Rhinnaon and so full of fun to read, put a smile on my face.

Jenny.

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

smiley  Glad it did, thanks for telling me! Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Di_Hard on

 

Jaunty rhythm and custard coming at the end as if plonked on the table infront of an eager child, spoon at the ready

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

!! Glad it causes a bit of fun! Thanks. Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Ray Schaufeld on

Yummy!

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

smiley !! Lovely comment, Elsie! I hope you are coping fairly well with whatever you are up to these days.

regards, Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Tom Brown on

Very nice Rhianon! Traditionally yellow is for faithfulness such as of “gold rings”. “A yellow ribbon round the old oak tree, she wears a yellow ribbon in the merry month of May”. Can you think of any?

Beautiful for kids, simple things can make them very happy grown-ups too.

Goodnight! Enjoy church!

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thank you, Tom. I didn't know that about the link of yellow to faithfulnes –, because of gold I suppose.

May you know God's blessing in church tomorrow too! Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Tom Brown on

I wish, but there's always the radio. It was a bad night toothache didn't sleep a wink- better now! Maybe I made it up the stuff of yellow and faithfulness. Well even so, yellow is in the rainbow!

Tom Brown