Twilight Strokes
By Richard L. Provencher
Mon, 14 Oct 2019
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evening’s sky
as shadows lurk
upon low tide’s gleam.
A pastel of colour
those images are
and soon the scene
will collapse
into all of nothing.
Colours escape
lightness -- shadowy
then darkness
a black hole
of murmurs -- oh
silence.
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Hi Richard,
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Hi Richard,
I read this like you were painting on canvas and describing what you were seeing. So much of art work is down to colour. I enjoyed your impressions in a poem.
Jenny.
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