Taken Out of the Fight
By JamesF
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Four sit on a bench by Hartlepool War Memorial,
trying to look busy and failing. The sheer
embarrassment at their unemployment and
inactivity pasted crudely on their acne-ridden
faces and longing stares, as I walk past.
A few paces away, the red borough council
building, where earlier I had heard plans from
the mouth of the chief executive, hopeful
of change, realistic that town rejuvenation
would take time. As I exited, these four were
of course still there, an hour later, one for all,
and, if they remembered, all for one, beside
a monument to struggle, another form of work
to fight and die for thy neighbour, thy country.
But the fight had been taken out of these four.
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That last line is so
That last line is so effective, rounding the poem off really well and highlighting the connections you have hinted at before. I also like the way you portray the chief executive, not as a villain, which it would be easy to do, but as someone frustrated and stymied by reality. Lots of thought and sadness in this.
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