A Jewel
By Richard L. Provencher
Sun, 17 Nov 2019
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Among
a forest of green
Kennabi
kingly rests
as
tall wind-soaked trees
stand
whispering still
and
near his stately shore
the
water floods.
Below
pine-dotted ridges
rushing
can be audibly heard
of
dancing water that slap-slaps
at
the foam-studded shore.
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I love this.
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I love this.
But what is Kennabi?
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Thank you. And now that makes
Permalink Submitted by drew_gummerson on
Thank you. And now that makes perfect sense.
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dancing water
Especially the end is excellent, "dancing water that slap-slaps"
See you Richard! &
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