Diversion
By Parson Thru
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For a while, I’m lost
I must have drifted off
To look out is to look in, at my companion across the table
At the foursome opposite, slightly elevated
At the line of lights, soft green and red, which raise a passing curiosity
A book lies open by my hand, cover uppermost, a newspaper folded beneath
My glasses case
Plastic arm of glasses pinched between thumb and forefinger, moving almost imperceptibly
We have slowed
Interior gives way to illuminated buildings, lit yards paging right to left
Whole streets of human life – a river interrupts, hollow overbridge
A level crossing imposes anonymity between two stranded halves of a different evening
Chequerboard of windows, lit yards, illuminated buildings
And the diversion's gone
My companion is tipping Pringles in small piles
The line of green and red resumes its unobtrusive glow
A gentle, insistent force rocks me right, then left
Plastic arm presses forefinger and thumb
And I’m lost again
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"Chequerboard of windows, lit
"Chequerboard of windows, lit yards, illuminated buildings" I like that, reminds me of Klee paintings, cosy and other at the same time.
You have brought time into this like anything, the almost sleepy rhythm and repeated words. The feeling of being somewhere/one else is very strong!
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I did start the free OU one,
I did start the free OU one, but it was a bit complicated for me (I am not good with websites sometimes) and there were so many people it was like raindrops. I wanted to write a story for my niece's birthday, but just keep rearranging the first paragraph - it has taken so long she is into make up now! Are you doing English/American Literature?
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That IS a good idea :0)
That IS a good idea :0)
I like your writing much more than Kerouac - more sensitive and not show offy!
I hope you love the course and it takes your mind off sad stuff. You will go from missing o level to BA hons :0)
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'Whole streets of human life
'Whole streets of human life – a river interrupts, hollow overbridge
A level crossing imposes anonymity between two stranded halves of a different evening'
Lovely lines. You have conjured a lost feeling very well.
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You evoke the complexity of
You evoke the complexity of the moment with such subtlety.
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