The World
By Richard L. Provencher
Fri, 24 Jan 2020
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is a fine place to be
even during
its haughty moments
and when evening kisses
the mountain edge
twilight shows its face
and soon to be
darkness and shadow
are King and Queen
of the night.
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evening kisses the mountain edge
A beautiful descripition of sunset and dusk and twilight and "when evening kisses the mountain's edge" but your poem's title seems to me a bit out of place. "King and Queen" also doesn't sound quite right.
Although yes some excellent work, straight from the heart as always &&
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