Nightmares

By monodemo

Sun, 23 Feb 2020
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4 comments
 

Violent

Nightmares,

Every night.

 

 Vivid

Images,

Penetrate.

 

Violence

Digressing,

Eyes open.

 

Tablets

Inviting,

Ingestion.

 

Silence,

Peace,

Success!

Certificate PG
Poem
2020

Comments

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

I've been there and it's not a nice place to be. You describe it well, like the twisting of a knife.

Jenny.

 

Submitted by monodemo on

thanks for the feedback jenny

Submitted by onemorething on

I like how sparse this is, it gives the feeling of nightmare and fear well and benefits from a little freedom from rhyme. :)

 

Submitted by monodemo on

thank you onemorething. i appreciate the feedback